Tag: 2022 writing year 4

Characters – Narito and Sakura 

Desert – pyramid, tomb – went by helicopter, 

They find their way with an old map

Traps along the way, deactivate – stone rolling down, hole in floor

 

Middle

Then they find a big chamber, and the floor is covered with huge snake skeletons.  

Check the map for other doors/ or secret exits. They decide to walk across the skeletons. Bones cracking to dust, or they rise up, coils moving.

Escape – snakes are scared of the flaming torch. It allows them to run straight across.

 

end 

go through the secret door when they go to grab a torch on the wall. And the door opens. They find treasure – gold, necklaces, masks, goblets, jewellery with diamonds, rubies, sapphires, emeralds

They go and sell some of the treasure and then they go to find another under the sea.

 

Bein Writing here 

arah and wiremu were excited they were almost at the tomb that was on their treasure map.the camels moved slow they were stuck and they have to find a way so they have to look for the secret door. they saw snakes coming to them they run they saw a door and go to it. arah open it and that room was the snake room they got a torch.the snakes run away and they found the secret door wiremu open the door. and they both ran to find the treasure they both were finding the 

 

treasurer. it was under the gound 

They got it and run. the snakes was at them but arah shut the door berfor the snakes came.